Monday, May 19, 2025

Let's Write With Heart

When writing a story, it’s essential to grab the reader’s attention in the first few lines. Readers aspire to connect with the narration and characters portrayed almost immediately. 


An engaging synopsis benefits reader engagement. Consider the sentient needs of a reader to connect them with your stories. A writer must first read their work with a critical eye for more precise understanding and strive for clarity before showcasing their craft to other readers. Describing emotions effectively in a story will depend on careful word and phrase selection. 

A book must resonate with readers on multiple levels, both emotionally and intellectually. 

In this regard, Emotional Quotient (EQ) helps writers in their craft. With a strong EQ level, writers can create a sense of connection with the reader, making the reader feel understood, moved, or engaged on an emotional level. 

In essence, EQ is crucial for creating writing that connects with readers personally. A writer with high EQ can choose words, craft sentences, and structure narratives in ways that resonate with a reader's feelings, making the writing more impactful and memorable. A relatable emotional quotient (EQ) conveys empathy for a specific topic chosen for a book

(Excerpt from my book, Small Step, Big Impact, Better Writer. Get your copy today. The links are at the bottom of the page).


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“Charlie, here in our village, people are not educated because they prefer to live simply without gaining any knowledge through books. They believed that education complicated a man’s life and made him think outside the box. Anyway, they didn’t believe that you had to learn from books before you grew in wisdom. You grew in wisdom through experience. Even your father hates learning new things. He doesn’t believe he needs to learn how to read or write. He believes in passing down centuries old knowledge of farming to you, so you carry on the tradition of a farmer’s way of life.”


I love this review on From Skopje to India. Thank you for such a kind review. I truly appreciate it: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DXP4WB4D#:~:text=https%3A//amzn.to/3GZosQl

Reviewed in the United States on May 11, 2025

I devoured "The Heart's Journey" in one sitting, swept away by Majorie Yakob's luminous account of her 1929 odyssey to Calcutta. The author masterfully captures the protagonist's transformation from wide-eyed traveler to spiritual seeker. Her descriptions of India's landscape transported me completely—I could feel the monsoon rains on my skin and smell the spices in crowded marketplaces.
What elevates this narrative is its refusal to succumb to colonial clichés. Instead, we witness genuine cultural exchange as Majorie establishes her teaching mission. Her romance with Kincaid Roberts unfolds with beautiful restraint—their connection deepening against the backdrop of societal constraints.
The prose is exquisite without being pretentious, each sentence crafted with care. Days later, I find myself revisiting passages, searching for the quiet wisdom nestled between descriptions of "gorgeous landscape, culture and beliefs." A remarkable achievement.
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A Word On Writing:

Have you ever thought to be a writer? What makes a writer stand out in a crowd?

The writing journey is filled with rejections and challenges. High EQ equips writers with the emotional resilience to cope with setbacks, learn from criticism, and persevere in pursuing their goals.
Here's a book that will help you visualise, imagine and feel the words in a story. Get your copy today. Printed copies are available on demand.

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The writing journey is filled with multiple challenges. High EQ equips writers with the emotional resilience to cope with setbacks, learn from criticism, and persevere in pursuing their goals

Small Step, Big Impact, Better Writer is a book by Shobana Gomes. An author and poet, she has more than 10 years of experience in storytelling and has won awards for her poetry, prose, novels, and essay writing.

What’s Inside This Book: ● Introduction 1. Let’s Write with Heart 2. The Influence of Vivid Imagery & Descriptions 3. How do the readers feel when writers leave a lasting impact with their books? 4. In Conclusion 5. Questionnaire 6. Exercises 7. Writing Tips with Illustrations

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